Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Elevator Pitch No. 4

1. Elevator Pitch No. 4:
Link on Youtube: https://youtu.be/Htq8kVwCZrs

2. People who watched my video say I need to sound more enthusiastic and also to get to my pitch's point sooner. My voice was too soft in the last pitch and I took too long to get to my point in the video.

3. For this final pitch, I raised my voice and made myself sound more eager. I used my hands more to show excitement and movement. I also took people's suggestion of cutting down my pitch and getting closer to the point sooner.

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