2. While my commentaries were kind and receptive to my pitch for my service, the only constructive advice I received was to set up the camera in a way that I was talking to a group of people and more of my body could be seen overall. I did as they suggested and set up the camera in a way where viewers could see a greater portion of myself in the video. The majority of my commentaries were supportive of my previous pitch.
3.Based on the feedback I received, I set up my phone camera in a certain so that when it recorded my pitch, it recorded a larger view of my overall body, allowing the viewers to see an appropriate amount of myself and not just my face and neck.
Hey Rosie,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was a little long but other than that it was pretty solid. This is the first time I have heard of an idea such as yours. It took you a while for you to actually make your pitch. Your voice is really soothing but it needs to be more enthusiastic. As far as the idea goes, wireless charging rentals, especially for older and less tech-friendly libraries, is an amazing idea! Check out my pitch here http://intro2ent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey! I think its cool you took the feedback from the other pitches and fixed this one, with setting the camera in a different position and showing more of your body language. But, like Ryan said, I think your pitch was a little lengthy, so maybe next time try to make it shorter! You should check mine out. http://principlesofent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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